Okay I don't have very many super early shots of this draw but I'm currently working on a drawing of Karyuudo ('s ghost hunter) punching Ryoushi (mine) in the face. So, I'm making this journal not only to change my CSS but to get some help in the process of this drawing. Ryoushi's legs are what I'm worried most about so yeah... if you comment it's appreciated. Even more appreciated would be editing in your suggestions so I can visually see the changes.

[link] This is the earliest shot I saved. xD Note Karyuudo's nub arm?

[link] Lots of inking and erasing. Now I'm on to a new layer to work on Karyuudo's legs.

[link] Started on her legs more-so. I had her rather crappily balanced so I called in some help.

[link] As said, called in some help. Here's 's edit (red lines). I think she did a better job than I did so I rolled with it.

[link] Here's Karyuudo fully inked.Somewhere along the line I changed her eyes so she would be looking at Ryoushi while punching her.

So yeah... next step is obviously erasing Karyuudo's sketch lines and starting on Ryoushi's legs. Help/comments/advice?
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[link] Okay okay, you guys were helpful with a few suggestions. I decided to leave Ryoushi's hair alone as the movement of her head to the side in such a quick snap could carry her bangs across her face like that. Also her pony tail looked weird going the other direction. As for Karyuudo, her hair and coat now move a different way. To make her arm look less stubby I messed with it. Also changed Ryoushi's hand from being flat against her stomach. Oh, and one last thing? I sketched in Karyuudo's favorite weapon- a fish.

EDIT: Okay yes I now know Ryoushi's thumb is on the wrong side. I'll fix it. Comment on other stuff please.